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Ninja Bio
Name: Keen Black
Age: 17
Clan: Kuraen (Adopted)
Rank: Genin
Masteries: Lightning, Weapon
Organization: Red Moon
---STORY---
Keen opens his eyes seeing a blue haired girl standing over his body.
Keen: "Where am I?"
Blue Haired Girl: "You're in the chakra forest. Why are you out here laying down"
Keen: "I don't know. Last thing I remember I was at the Divine Tournament."
Blue Haired Girl: "Divine wha?"
Keen passes out and later wakes up in a hospital. Confused about his new environment, Keen roams around the area and gathers information of his whereabouts. Keen soon realize he is not back in his original world and is a different world ran by ninja military forces. The place he is at, known as Konohagakure or the Leaf Village. With the loss of his old abilities, Keen joins into the Leaf's military ninja academy to retrain himself and learn ninjutsus of the new world.
---TRAINING DAYS---
Keen later meets up with the blue haired kinoichi that helped him in the chakra forest. Her name was Korobo and was often seen with her two partners Irukio and Kreouse training. Though not part of the gang, Keen begins to hang around them as they were the first to invite him with their training. Through out his training, Keen began to recover some of his skills but lacked in many areas. One day as Keen was around the leaf's training grounds with his gang of friends, doing some sprints to gain some stamina. In the middle of one of his laps Keen ran into what appeared to him as a white pillar with a pink fuzzy fur on its top. Confused Keen looks up and notices its another ninja with oddly pink hair.
Keen: "Who are you?"
The ninja turns around and looks at Keen with a cocky smirk on his face.
Unknown Ninja: "You don't know who I am? I'm the Greatest!"
Korobo yells at Keen to get away from the pink haired ninja as he is known as a enemy ninja of the leaf. In his defense Keen grabs a kunai from his side pocket but the pink hair ninja notices his actions and quickly round house kicks Keen knocking him out. Keen later wakes up in the hospital wander what happened. Him and his three friends were all hospitalized. Upon their recovery, Irukio informs Keen of the ninja who defeated them. His name was Booty Gang Captain. Enraged at seeing his teammates hurt, Keen made it his main goal to become stronger to kill Booty Gang Captain.
---FIRST MASTERY---
One day outside the village in a dark forest, Keen was doing intense self training. In the middle of his training he heard noises of what sounded like metal colliding. Curious Keen ran to the area and saw three ninjas fighting each other. The battle was intense two versus one. Though outnumbered the ninja with a distinct orange hair won and finishing his last opponent off with a jutsu, impaling them in the stomach with a electric current in his hand. Seeing this Keen decided his first mastery will be lightning.
---THE END OF A FRIENDSHIP AND A BETRAYAL---
Keen and his team of friends was sent out on a scouting mission for leaf. They were to report back anything they found to the mission desk. Kreouse, the strongest of the team lead the mission. As they traversed through the chakra forest, Keen had to fix his gear equipment and decided to fall back to fix his attachments. Upon catching up, Keen saw Kreouse alone with blood around his body.
Keen: "Kreouse? What happened, where are the others?
Kreouse: "The leaf is soft, we are constantly getting defeated."
Keen: "I don't understand. What are you saying? Where is Korobo and Irukio?"
Kreouse: "I'm sorry but, I can't stay there any longer. I'm leaving the leaf."
Kreouse flickers behind Keen holds him into a choke hold until he fell unconscious. Keen later woke up in the hospital. From that day forward he has not seen his friends, Korobo, Irukio, nor Kreouse.
---KEEN'S RESOLVE---
During his training Keen have been attacked countless times by enemy ninjas. Most of the leaf ninjas were too busy trying have peace with the enemies while not knowing they were being taken advantage of. During the so called peace, Keen would see comrades slain when outside the gates of the village. This left Keen with much anger with the leaf, as he does not believe the leaf care for their comrades. Constant calling them "soft" as he notices they would rather peaceful approaches than to defend their own. The leaf's passive actions lead to desertions of many comrades such as Keen's rival Wolfskin Reiketsu.
One day the Kazekage came into the village with an offer of peace treaty, bringing his ANBU forces with him. Keen was instantly angered, but before he stepped out of line, a fire ball flew past him from behind and collided with one of the ANBU members killing them on the spot. Shocked, Keen turn and see a ninja walking past him with a familiar distinct orange hair. His name was Atrane. Atrane was not liking the Kazekage coming into the leaf. It took the Chunin Wilkor and two others to hold him back. Keen felt the murderous intent from Atrane, and inspired to be just like him. Keen decided from that way forward to fight on the on the front lines and send his enemies a message.
---RED MOON---
While trying to follow into Atrane's footsteps, Keen involved himself in every raid, defense, or battle he has came across. When fighting single or multiple opponents, Keen would meet constant defeat. This led to Keen not wanting to venture out in the village anymore. One day in the hospital, Keen overheard an organization of elites and their leader but not much about what they do were known. On his second night of recovery in the hospital Keen look outsides his window towards a building of where some say the organization is located at. It was raining but Keen was determined to get stronger. He limped his way towards the organization and banged on the door. Though no one answered, he sensed a presence on the other side of the door.
Keen: "So let me tell you this, for starters, I have always looked up to Atrane as someone who never second guesses to defend the leaf. Killing an enemy before the Kazekage's feet, fighting to defend fellow comrades during peacetime, and always there to jump when duty calls, even when going alone. Being able to match his strength someday has been one of my goals as a fellow leaf. But lately.....it has been hard to do something on my own. When backed against the wall fighting multiple or single opponents, sand or missing, my attempts have failed multiple times. Surprisingly through my countless defeats, I've see power towards the end of the tunnel. This power is not something done on one's own, but as a group. So tell me, what must one do to gain this power? What must one do to claim victory on the battle field? What must one do to join, The Red Moon?"
The door opens up and before Keen stood Deathmall looking down at him.
Deathmall: "I liked the speech and for that I'll give you a Red Moon mentor that will help you to reach the Red Moon requirement. After that's completed you'll be invited to a meeting and then be accepted on from there, after you've completed your "internship" session. I'll decide on the Red Moon mentor tonight and have him contact you"
Tears came to Keen's eyes as he now have something to believe in again.
Keen: "Thank you, I'll be looking forward to my mentor."
A few days later, Keen was doing recovery rehabilitation at a training HQ. At the end of the red vs blue match Keen begins to make his way towards the exit. He stops in his tracks as he hears a clapping noise. Keen turns around and to his surprise he sees Atrane clapping.
Atrane: "Nice work in there Keen."
Keen is suprised, as Atrane never gave him any attention before.
Atrane: "So I heard you want to be in Red Moon."
Keen: "Y-yes. I do."
Atrane: "That's great, so guess what. I'll be your mentor from now on. Don't disappoint me."
Keen: "omghadfhkladhfklaheiofhaed!!!" (I lost my mind when this happened)
From that day forth Keen trained directly under Atrane as he worked toward joining the Red Moon.
---THE KURAEN CLAN---
Keen's fighting skills have advanced a lot over the weeks. Whenever out on the field Keen is always by Atrane's side fighting and learning from his mentor. As his skill rose, Keen has caught the eye of the Kuraen clan. He was contacted my Kuraen Rumaki.
Rumaki: "Keen, we need shinobi like you to help our foundation to grow so we can protect the leaf village. We will train you and show you how to be a Kuraen. We will be there when you need us. We need your power, come to us strong shinobi."
Keen: "Hmmm...can I think on it or must I give a decision now?"
Rumaki: "Shortly."
Keen: "Well sorry but I must decline. I have a special mentor who is currently training me. I do acknowledge the Kuraens for their battle prowess, but I don't think I can find myself to belong to a clan yet. I have not completely found my place in the leaf yet, and don't know what skills I can provide for others as I am utterly weak at the moment."
With all being said, Keen made his farewell and continued off with training. A few weeks later Keen was in an intense battle with a rogue ninja with Kuraen Josh at this side. Their skills complimented each other, and defeated the rogue with ease.
Josh: "Well that was easy."
Keen: "Yea it was."
Josh: "Hey Keen."
Keen: "Yes?"
Josh: "Why don't you enjoy us? The Kuraens. Join our clan, you have good skill."
Keen: "But my skills are not that great."
Josh: "Do you really think that?"
Kuraen Josh points towards the dead rogue. Keen turn his head towards the body. He begins to think about Kuraen Rumaki's inventation. Keen looks back at Kuraen Josh with a smile.
Keen: "Very well, I accept."
Josh: "Nice, welcome aboard...Kuraen Keen"
---CHUNIN EXAMS---
(W.I.P)
---SPECIAL THANKS---
Thank you everyone who has read my story! It is long, and probably might get longer. I do plan on adding more things to it to make it more interesting, such as pictures to make it more appealing. My story is composed of all major events of what happened to me while playing ninonline. As this is a role playing game, for role play I wrote the story and script to match my experience. Some are actual chats others are reworked to fit the role play but are still in context of what have actually happened to me on my adventures. Again thank you for taking your time for reading, I hope you enjoyed my story.
---MY LEGACY---