Kuraen Eder

       

                                                                                               BIO

                                                Name: Eder   Age: 18   Rank: Genin   Mastery: Wind   Title: ???

                                                                                            STORY

In this snowy landscape we can see a young man meditating, ignoring the cold the boy is still concentrated to dominate the inner peace...

      

Wait a minute! "Still" Right, I still not told you... Well, this is the story from one of the many aspirants to become Hokage and of a dreamer who dreams of being one of the best wind users in the Shinobi World, a story in which the young man faces his bitter past to transform it into a lesson that will help it in the learning of the inner peace...

 

                                                                                      CHAPTER 1: THE DOCUMENT

August 11, 2018
     
It was a normal day in the Leaf Village, the shinobis were doing their respective missions and others preferred to take a relaxed bath in the hot springs.
In the meantime, I was addresing to the Hosts Cave, but on the path to the cave I found MacDom and Arubaro killing bears and I proceeded to greet them.

 Kuraen Arubaro: Hi broh.

 Kuraen MacDom: Sup Eder, where are you going so fast?

 Eder: I'm going to the Hosts Cave, I need to kill some hosts for my mission.

 Kuraen MacDom: Oh! perfect, I need some DNA for a mission, are you coming Aru?

 Kuraen Arubaro: Sure.

Passed around 30 minutes Eder, MacDom and Arubaro left the cave... And just when they were on the way back to the village to deliver the mission, they found with his village being attacked by bandits, the bandits went into the houses of the villagers to steal all their materials.
 
The three young shinobis went on the attack, Arubaro throws his Great Fireball to defeat a large group of them, after that a group of bandits going to attack MacDom, MacDom confuses them using the substitution trinity to give them a shower of fists, the bandits were getting more closer to the small group of young shinobis, the young shinobis tried to keep them apart with their techniques, but more and more bandits were approaching to them, in that same moment a large area of electricity manages to paralyze them. It was Jellal!

 Aru and Mac: Jellal!

 *Then the small group saw a Colliding Wave and a Dragon Fire ravaging the bandits. They were Ohiya and Elodin!*

 Aru and Mac: Ohiya! Elodin!

 Kuraen MacDom: It's nice to see you guys!

 Kuraen Elodin: They are like ten squadrons, so what is the plan?

 Jellal Kuraen: Hmmm... Alright! Eder and Ohiya defend the villagers removing the bandits with your techniques! Mac go to the west of the village and you Elodin go to the east, defeat as many bandits as you can guys!
Aru and me will stay at the front repelling them, if you see that they have bags with them, take them off, that's where they keep the stolen materials. Are you ready guys!?
 
 Eder and Ohi: Yep!
 
 Elodin and Mac: Of course!

 Kuraen Arubaro: Ready like always!

 Jellal Kuraen: Go then!

*The group of ninjas spread out, Eder and Ohiya ended up with two squadrons, Ohiya manages to recover two bags and Eder three bags, Eder opened the bags and saw their contents:

 Eder: What is this...? metal tools!? Why they would want to have metal tools...? Some of the metal tools that they have in here are not weapons. What the hell...?

*Elodin ended up with two squadrons and MacDom with other two too, they recovered five bags between the two of them*

*Some bandits were trying to escape from the village with the stolen materials, but it was impossible because there they were Jellal and Arubaro to stop them, they managed to recover six bags*

 Bandit: Commander Jhen, there are only two squadrons left

 Jhen: Tchh... SQUADRON NUMBER ONE keep them busy! SQUADRON NUMBER TWO help me to escape from the village with all the bags that you see around!

*But it was useless because in that same moment Eder appeared and sent one of the squadrons into the air with his wind gusts*

 Jhen: What the...!? Wait... A Fuku... No, that's impossible...!
 
*After that, the group of shinobis easily defeated the last squadron, the only one left was the Commander, he set out to attack the group with his metal fist:

 Eder: Don't be worry guys, this one's mine.

*But in the same moment that the Commander set out to attack, Eder could see a extrange symbol in his right shoulder that let him stunned, at that moment Eder had a vision:

 ???: *Sobs* *Sobs*
 
 ???: Shhhs little one, or you'll be discovered.

*By the time when the vision ended Eder could feel the impact of the metal fist in his face making him fell to the ground*

 Jhen: Jajaja, eat that stupid shinobi.

*Jhen managed to escape with two bags and some bandits who were on the ground got up and take a few bags with them*

 Jellal Kuraen: Tch... They escaped...
 
 Kuraen Elodin: Shit!
 
 Mac and Ohi: Are you okay Eder!?

 Kuraen Arubaro: What happened to you?

 Eder: I think I've seen... I think... I have to go.

 The next day at the Hokage's office...

 Ishyn Hokage: A document of the Second?

 Eder: Yes, he is the only one with whom I spent my childhood on the Leaf Village before arriving at the academy, if anyone knows  something about my past, it must be him.

 Ishyn Hokage: Eder... Are you okay?

 Eder: Yes, I'm fine. It's just that when the bandits invaded the village I could have a vision... A vision of my past... My true past.

 Ishyn Hokage: Hmm I see... Usually, I can not leave anyone who don't have the maximum authority a document, but as I see you  were very close to the Second, I'll make an exception.

 Eder: Really!? Oh thank you Ishyn!

 Ishyn Hokage: Here you are.

 Eder: Let's see what it says here... Oh! Here! Right in this paragraph. *Reading* "I was in my office like any other day, I was about to comission the missions for the day, but a very concerned person just broke into my office in that moment, It was Jouchi, the head of the ramen restaurant, he told me that when he went to pick up the box of ramen ingredients outside his restaurant he found a little baby among the ingredients.
Jouchi overwhelmed me wondering what we should do, he couldn't take care of the baby, I looked at the baby and I made a decision the First made once with me... Raise the baby like the First raised me.  
I named him Eder, he was a very naughty boy, he was always running away from my workouts to fight with the children of the village, I always watched him from the office.
Since that moment my life has been so much sweeter." *Finish reading* And that's it all? It can't be possible... There's got to be more! *Eder looks at the document with sadness and gives it to Ishyn*

 Ishyn Hokage: Eder, I want you to know that even if you don't know your past, you'll always be a shinobi of the Leaf.

 Eder: Yeah... I know it, thank you Ishyn, see ya.

 *Eder left the Hokage's building

 Ishyn Hokage: He's a good boy, he's always appreciated you so much, hasn't he, Shirou? But it seems that the appreciation with the time has been disappearing... Isn't that right? Wilkor-sensei.
You've heard our whole conversation, haven't you? You're certainly a very good hunter, you know how to hide well...

 Kuraen Wilkor (Cloak activated): Hmpfh...

                                                                                 

                                                                                      CHAPTER 2: THE MYSTERIOUS VISIT

 

 While in Tanzaku City...

                                                       

*A mysterious figure approaches to the city gates...

*A couple of guards realize of it, and try to pounce on him, but they failed, the mysterious figure just ended their lives without any effort.

*The gates opened aggressively and the mysterious man showed up, his hair was long and white, he wore a white robe, a strange leg made of metal and a Naginata as his weapon. On the other hand there were three strange figures fighting  each other in front of the city castle. These were Kumari, Takei and Yarton! 

*The figure continued approaching to the center of the city, then the warriors recognized him but they still doubting. 

The Three: Shissou?

The mysterious man was Shissou!

Shissou: Greetings gentlemen, now we've got the pleasantries out of the way, please leave my castle.

Takei: Your castle?

Shissou: Yes, didn't you see the family tree of this site? (Asked sarcastically.)

*Continues walking*

Shissou: Ahh there you were Soothsayer, it seems your prophetic endowments are not as good as you thought.

Soothsayer: We shall see Shissou.

Shissou: Oh you shall see stupid old lady... Where were be? 
                                                                                                                 
Yarton: What do you want Shissou? (Asked impatiently)

Shissou: What rightfully belongs to me, Tanzaku City! (Answered firmly)

Yarton: Tanzaku City is under the management of the Masters Council and the Princess Kasai, the new and lawfully Lord of the Land of Fire, and we'll we protect it, even from you.

Shissou: Ufuhahahahaha, I'm so glad you feel that way! Otherwise, bringing this all the way here would have been in vain.

*There is a group of bandits behind Shissou carrying a box over a carriage

Takei: What's in the box Shissou!? (Asked aggressively)

Shissou: Want to see? It's a gift, it's your parting gift, in that it will part you... Part of you here, part of you there, and part of you waaaaaaaaaay over there STAINING IN THE WALL!!!

Takei: You insolent fool!

*Takei tries to pounce on Shissou, but it was useless because Shissou threw a chain down the sleeve that completely grabbed Takei's body and smashed it against the ground.
Suddenly Kumari joins into the attack trying to punch Shissou with his Poison Scalpel, but Shissou manages to dodge him by standing behind his back and pushing him away with his metal leg, followed by a shower of daggers under his sleeves, Kumari realised this and managed to block a great number of them by activating his Chakra Daggers. After that, both Masters raised up and continued their attack on Shissou, the evil prince prepares itself for the battle by wielding his Naginata, after a few minutes exchanging blows, Shissou was able to throw a handful of daggers at Yarton, that was the moment when Yarton had joined the battle repelling all the daggers Shissou threw at him, and pushing him 6 inches away with the tip of his sword thus breaking a great number of daggers under his sleeve

Shissou: Aagh show-off...

Yarton: This is a warning... You're no MATCH for our skill level (Says with decision)

Shissou: I admit it... But THIS yes.

*Shissou makes an evil smile and turns back to open the mysterious box, then Yarton prepares himself to stop the secret contents of the mysterious box ANNNDDDD...

Leaf Village

3 hours after the attack of the bandits...

I was heading to the village to deliver my last mission of the day when I encountered Elodin, Jellal, Ohiya, MacDom and Aru running towards Outskirts

Eder: Hey guys! What are you doing?

*Jellal, Mac and Ohi already entered into Outskirts.

Kuraen Arubaro: Yo broh, there's almost no time for explanations, Wilkor called us urgently to gather at Outskirts.

Eder: Can I join you, boys? If you don't mind of course.

Kuraen Arubaro: I really don't know broh... I don't know if Wilkor will mind...

Kuraen Elodin: Oh! I don't think Wilkor would mind, after of all Eder it's a close friend of the clan, he has helped us many times.

Kuraen Arubaro: Hmmm... Well then.

Eder: Yay!

Kuraen Wilkor: Come on, go in! Oh you're here Eder, come in if you want to, but quickly!

*They all went in

Kuraen Wilkor: Well I gathered all of you there because I received an important inform from Tanzaku City, but first of all... Jellal they need you in Leaf Council now, I apologize for bringing you all the way here, they told me when I was on my way to Outskirts.

Kuraen Jellal: There's no problem Wilkor-san, don't have to apologize, well see you guys.

All: See ya Jellal.

*Jellal has left Outskirts

Kuraen Wilkor: Well, we can start now... Wait a minute... Where the hell are Vali and Skypen!? I know Skypen has a job, but she should have left an hour ago. And I assigned a mission to Vali 2 hours ago, I can't believe it, where the heck is that br-

Kuraen Elodin: Skypen told me that she had to do extra hours today. (Interrupts Wilkor)

Kuraen Wilkor: I see... Then that just leaves us with Vali's case...

*Someone entered into Outskirts

???: Yo guys! How yall doing?

Kuraen Wilkor: Vali! I assigned you a mission 2 hours ago, you're supposed to be here in less than an hour, what the hell were you doing!? And most importantly... Did you get the documents from Sand?

Kuraen Vali: Of course I do! Why do you say that like you won't trust me?

Kuraen Wilkor: I trust you, but you act in a very reckless way, you have to improve your stealth on infiltration missions.

Kuraen Vali: There is nothing to improve Old Man... I've killed them all while I was stealing the documents, that's my way to act, it's just you're getting old, and that makes you cranky and boring.

*Wilkor pulls a cane out of his uniform and smacks Vali with it

Kuraen Wilkor: Damn you brat!

Kuraen Vali: Fuck, my head!

Eder: ... (What the hell's going on!?)

Kuraen Wilkor: Oh, by the way Vali, this is Eder, he's going to help us on a mission, salute him.

Kuraen Vali: Yo kiddo, how ya doing?

Eder: Yo Va... (Kiddo!?)

*Another person has entered into Outskirts

???: Sorry Wilkor, I suppose Elo must have told you that I was gonna be a little late cause of extra hours, I'm sorry for that.

Kuraen Wilkor: You don't have to apologize Skypen, you have your reasons, unlike others...

Kuraen Vali: Yeah Edar! You should be ashamed of yourself!

Eder: Pardon me!? You were the only one who came late! And it's "Eder"!!!

Kuraen Wilkor: Calm down you two! Or I'll pull out my cane again!

Eder: Sorry sir!

Kuraen Vali: Ok, ok...

Kuraen Wilkor: Well, we can continue, this is Skypen, introduce yourself to Eder ple-

Eder: Ooooh!! I know you! You're Skypen! that woman of the Water Serving School, geez, your water is the best in all the Land of Fire!! (Interrupts Wilkor)

Kuraen Skypen: Yikes! You're very observant kid! You know how to recognize good quality when you see it, would you like to marry me in a future?

Eder: Of course, why n... M-M-MARRY!?!? M-Marrying someone it's a-a big s-step so I t-think that I'm n-not p-p-prepared y-yet! S-SORRY!! (Screams internally)

Kuraen Ohiya: Come on, mam, you're scaring him!!!

Kuraen Skypen: It was just a little joke, come on! Don't tell me you were really thinking I was serious, were you, Elo?

Kuraen Elodin:... (Elodin makes an intimidating look at Skypen)

Kuraen Skypen: C-Come on! D-Don't stare at me like t-that! (Says trembling)

*Elodin and Skypen begins to discuss

Kuraen Ohiya: Geez...

Kuraen Wilkor: Fuuuuuuu... (Breathes deeply)

Kuraen Vali: Nice, you did it again Edar, congrats!

Eder: It wasn't my fault! And it's "Eder" "EDER"!!! For the sa-

Kuraen Wilkor: SILEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENCE!!!!!!!!!!

*Suddenly, a great wind wave pushed them

Eder:... (What was that!? It sounded like a strong roar, how terrifying can the leader of the Kuraen be...!?)

Kuraen Vali:... (Welp, it seems gramps got really upset)

Ohi and Skypen: Wow...

Kuraen MacDom: Yare, yare... 

Kuraen Elodin: He did it again huh? (Says quietly)

Kuraen Arubaro: Now I remember one of the things why I'd joined this clan... (Says quietly while he smiles)

Kuraen Wilkor: Hmmmm... (Calms itself) Well, now continuing with why I've gathered you here in such a hurry, it's because I've received a report from Tanzaku City. You know who is the most strong Master of Tanzaku City?

Eder: Yarton, the legendary swordsman of the Land of Fire!?

Kuraen Wilkor: Yes.

Eder: Son of the legendary GodHammer Thornkon!?

Kuraen Wilkor: Yes.

Eder: And the one who defeated the 20.000 snakes of Manda, cutting them only with the tip of his sword!?!?

Kuraen Wilkor: He's dead.

Eder: Oh...

Kuraen MacDom: That's impossible!

Kuraen Arubaro: Yeah, no technique can with the ancestral defense of the sword tip of Yarton!

Kuraen Wilkor: It wasn't a technique, Lord Shissou, the prince of Tanzaku City who got exiled for having erradicated an entire village has returned and fabricated a weapon, one which expels fire and spits metal. If nobody stops him... This could mean the end of the Shinobi Era...

Eder: But if I'm still too young to be no longer a ninja!

Kuraen Wilkor: And now is your duty to save it. Go, destroy that weapong and bring Lord Shissou to the justice!

Eder: Nice! There I go! There I gooooooo!!! Wowowowowowo hold on a sec... How I do that!? How can shinobis end up with something that ends up with shinobis!?!?

Kuraen Wilkor: Remember young shinobi, nothing is impossible when you have inner peace!

*Eder thinks about what Wilkor has just said to him and smiles with a hint of doubt in his gaze

Thus begins the journey of our protagonist to stop the evil Shissou. What will be the terrible weapon that he and his partners fears so much? Will they be able to defeat him and his weapon? Well, that will be in another chapter...

-TO BE CONTINUED...

 

                                                                                              TRIVIA OF TANZAKU CITY

Long ago in ancient Nin two kings ruled over the city and the Land of Fire, they brought great joy because they had invented the floats parades, (Curiosity: The floats were made of gold, the city melted the Ryo they gained thanks to the slot machines to create the floats, gold floats with the appearance of dragons) but their son Shissou saw darker power in the gold, he used the gold to create dangerous smuggling weapons that he sold to bandits on the city outskirts, what had brought color and joy could also bring darkness and destruction.

Shissou's worried parents consulted a soothsayer... She foretold that if Shissou continued down this dark path he would be defeated by an owl shinobi, the young prince was hiding during the conversation, and when he had finished listening the whole prophecy he set out to change his fate, but what he did next only sealed it... Shissou returned to his parents full of pride, but in their faces he saw only horror... He was exiled from the city forever for causing a genocide in a city-friendly village, but Shissou swore revenge... Someday he would return and all of Nin would bow at his feet...

 

                                                                            TRIVIA OF THE MASTERS COUNCIL OF TANZAKU

Kumari was the legendary medic who was able to heal wounds instantly, no matter how bad they were.
                                                
Takei the legendary Tai user who could be able to broke the weapons of their foes with his own naked hands.

And Yarton the legendary swordsman and the most powerful of the three, his legend was known for being able to repel any attack with the tip of his sword.                                                                   

                                                                                    The three together were known as:

                                               

 

                                                                                                    TRIVIA OF THE SOOTHSAYER

Her name was Mirai, she's originally from Takumi but sometimes she visits Tanzaku City to see how it's going in the mandate of Kasai.
Despite everything Shissou did she still wants to help him to leave the path he is taking.

                                                                                                     

 

                                                                                                   

                                                                                                    TRIVIA OF PRINCESS KASAI

Kasai was Shissou's sister, in their childhood she and his brother used to play near their father's throne, but all that happiness disappeared when Shissou left Tanzaku City, not for him, but for his parents. 

They loved their son so much that having to send him away made them sick, Kasai had no choice but to take care of his parents. Unfortunately, both ended up dying... The whole city was afflicted, they'd lost their governors and with it the hope, with the monarchy without anyone in it, Kasai had to make a hard but necessary decision, assume the position of their parents as governor of Tanzaku, but she wouldn't be alone because she had the support and the protection of Masters Council.

After all these incidents were over, Kasai's personality had become quite impertinent and believed, but that is just a mask to hide all her true feelings.